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Africa Comic - Promotional Poster by ARVEN92

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You wanted a critique, and i shall give you one ^^

Vision: The overall picture is just gorgeous! The light and shading is marvelous and I see no flaws in that. I love the effect you give with making the perspective look as if you are a bug on the ground looking at your beautiful character! The mountains are gorgeous in the background and the fading looks great! The grass looks great, how it covers her paws and over distance makes it harder to see her front paws. I love the sun and the color and the deepening of it away from the sun and how you can just slightly see the rays of the sun. But one thing is, if it is possible for you to just blend the sky the tiniest bit then it would look like the rest of the poster ^^

Originality: I would say in this category, it is not as original as they come but in the perspective, it seems new :) I have seen many scenes where the perspective is from straight behind or up above the characters looking out towards a beautiful horizon, usually mountains.

Technique: Your technique is always spot on! I see nothing wrong in this category :)

Impact: Overall again, this piece is just marvelous! I always loved your art and you can only get closer to the height of your abilities, which has definitely shown! :heart:
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ARVEN92 Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my, thank you so much for this critique! :D I'm so honoured that you like the promotional poster! <3

And thank you for the tip on blending the sky too^^ I will make sure I practice that XDDD
Truly, thank you for telling me this! <3 It took me a while to nail the anatomy of leopards, and it will take me even longer to master it XD I've still got a long way to go :D
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silvermoon2222 Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
you are very welcome and it is completely fine! your anatomy in this picture is so amazing i cannot draw leopards very well due to the shape and amount of spots, you have got that down very well! and i love big cats as well as canines so i can't wait for your new comic :) :heart:
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ARVEN92 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you a lot! <3 I'm so happy that you like it^^

Hoho, I can't wait either XD
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silvermoon2222 Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
your very welcome! ^^ :heart: and yeah ^^
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ARVEN92 Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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silvermoon2222 Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:heart:
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